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Francis Marion Admission Letter

Hi, my name is Zyaria Fulmore. I’m from Myrtle Beach, South Carolina. I graduated from Carolina Forest High School in June of 2018 with a 3.4 gpa. While in high school I attended many events and was also very athletic. My freshman year I was on the JV cheerleading team. I also ran track my freshman until junior year. My sophomore year I ran for student council, from there I became treasure of my sophomore class, I also did the same for my junior year. With me trying new things and observing everything in school I still managed to score A’s and B’s.

My goal in life is to help others and work with kids that’s why I would love to become a pediatrician . After doing research I found that Francis Marion University has one of the top nursing programs in South Carolina. I see Francis Marion bettering my education therefore I will become one of the best pediatricians. I’ve spoke with a few people that graduated from Francis Marion and I heard nothing but great things, also after seeing people that graduated from Francis Marion I see nothing but success coming from them.

Once I attend Francis Marion my plan is to be very active with my college experience. I plan to be very active with my academics also on campus. Keeping up with my grades maintaining a 3.0 or higher gpa, I would like to try for many things such as track and field and getting engaged with many other things. My education journey at Francis Marion will lead me to a great life with success.